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posted May 9th, 2013, 5:58 pm


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May 11th, 2013, 3:04 pm

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@staypee: Thanks for reading!
@Zenithlea: Thanks! I wonder what she did to earn your dislike though :D

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May 15th, 2013, 4:33 pm

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@Zenithlea: Haha I totally get how annoying the "damsel in distress" trope is, but in this context it's acknowledged that Chie is pathetic for ending up like that, so I don't think it really counts.
Yes, the spots are virus related :)

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May 9th, 2013, 10:28 pm

staypee (Guest)

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Im loving it!!
Poor Chie!

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May 9th, 2013, 11:53 pm

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Love the story but I have to say, I dislike Chie. She makes me want to whack her head hoping some sense gets knocked into her.

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May 12th, 2013, 12:28 pm

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@Maaria: The part where she got caught. Lol.
I think it's a habit of mine where I instantly dislike the 'damsels in distress' especially if they got caught due to their own carelessness. (Yep, I know she's still a trainee, but my brain doesn't care)
Oh yeah, just as a confirmation, are the spots beneath their eyes a trait from the ghost virus?

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May 15th, 2013, 9:15 am

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@Zenithlea: Damsel in distress?
I think you are wholly missing the point of her character, would you really prefer her to be perfect in everything at the first try?

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May 16th, 2013, 12:10 pm

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@yal: Nope, not a Mary Sue (geh, please no) but I would have liked her better if she had put up a bit more of a fight when she got caught, twice.
The "Please help me, sir" had me rooting for the guy to throw a chair at both her and the villain.
(As I said, brain gets the whole plot point and their characters, but if there's a dark broody character versus the sunny optimist (that's what Chie seems like to me atm), yeah- optimist gets the dislike from me. (I'm a pessimist is why. ^^;;)

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