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posted July 9th, 2018, 11:16 am


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July 9th, 2018, 11:16 am

Maaria

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You tell him guuuuurl

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September 22nd, 2018, 2:12 am

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July 9th, 2018, 2:49 pm

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@straane: Thanks! I'm trying to do something fresh with his archetype so I'm glad you appreciate it!
@Tissa: Ohhh nice take on that. I hadn't considered that irony actually. But yes, Jon likes to think he's invincible so any failure will hurt his ego like a motherfucker

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July 9th, 2018, 11:40 am

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I'm surprised by Jon's empathy and concern for Amber here, and how openly he expresses it. good job avoiding the "cool guy is too cool for human emotions" cliché.

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July 9th, 2018, 12:55 pm

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I remember that at the beginning of this ark he gave some harsh talk to Chie for her still being uselless and always needing help and that was why he was leaving her behind(can't remember which chapter or page that was at the moment) but now he ended up as the one needing for help. If that is why he is self loathing now then this is awesome.

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